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the sun and the science - Kiche - Feb 04, 2012
the sun and the science - SilverWintercoat - Feb 04, 2012 Before Silver joins Grizzly Hollow. Silver had been traveling again for a while sense her visit in Cedarwood forest. She was now traveling through the Dropping Willows in search of something, but what? What was it that pulled her to this area then she smelled it, the faint smell of a male wolf. She inhaled deeply trying to pen point the smell. Then Silver heard it a faint cry of some sorts. Silver sprung into action and tracked the smell. The warming weather was no help and made it harder for her to track. Springing atop a snow drift she saw it, a pile of snow and the smell drifted from it. Some instinct, like with Firefox, drove her to dig. She dug in the snow tell she saw it. It was a large male wolf with a Tawny and Ginger coat. Silver dug the rest of the wolf out and dragged the body under a tree. Silver leaned in close to the mass looking for any sign of life. Then, the wolf's sides heaved. She sprang back shocked that he was still alive. She licked the wolf's muzzle, like when a mother wolf licks a pup to get it to breath, and laid down beside him trying to keep him warm. the sun and the science - Puzzles - Feb 05, 2012 (Sorry its so short, a ps3 isn't the best thing to type with ) Puzzles heard the wailing echo off in the distance, sprung up and ran as he possibly could, and off he went to find out what had happened, with his sense of smell, Puzzles could clearly tell that it was one male and female wolf. As he quickly padded through the melted snow, Puzzles could see two blobs into the distance. Then, he eventually power-walked up to them both, still panting silently. He looked at the tall, silver female wolf, then looked at the large, pale tawny wolf, it looked freezing and frostbiten, which possibly could die of hunger or become frozen! Puzzles quickly thought 'Why, can I join them? of course I can!' So he snuggled in with them both, like a pup, hoping that his fluffy fur would sincerely help. the sun and the science - Kiche - Feb 06, 2012
the sun and the science - Puzzles - Feb 06, 2012 ( Sorry Silver but I can't wait another day! It was sooo tempting ) Puzzles backed away, feeling like he died from shock, he then ran up to the wolf that was attacking, shouting at him. " Stranger,You have to stop! she was trying to help you feel better! If it wasn't for her you'd be dead! You owe her with you're life and you're attacking her?". He started to pull the wolf's tail, if he was ignored Puzzles would pull harder again, saying twice about what had happened, if he was ignored again, Puzzles would eventually attack the wolf. the sun and the science - SilverWintercoat - Feb 06, 2012 Silver thought she heard screaming in her dreams. She woke to see Puzzles, a wolf she had meet a while ago, pulling the tail of another that was amming for her throat. She leaped back and pounced on the wolf hopping to at least distract the wolf from her throat.. She knew this could reopen her shoulder wound, but she had to help. Then she noticed it was him. The wolf they had just saved. Growling,"You! YOU! YOU! Selfish no good wolf, who by the way would be died if I wasn't happening to walk by. I am sick of you wolves! First it was Ryhsis now this?" Silver had lost her nerve, she new that and was actually happy about it. the sun and the science - Kiche - Feb 07, 2012
the sun and the science - Puzzles - Feb 08, 2012 Puzzles was furious with rage and decided not to explain what had happened twice. " Why do you keep ignoring me?! you think I'm a mindless and heartless shrew?! Well you thought Wrong!!!" he roared with anger, growling deeply and snarled. He stood up tall with his mouth wide open. Puzzles shoulders felt uneasy and difficult to move around , no matter." How dare a selfish bastard ignore me!" He said to himself.Puzzles had never felt so much anger inside of him in his life. ' Forgive me Silver 'He thought to himself. He charged like an angry bull, unable to stop at the moment.Puzzles then bounced on Kiche, trying to grab his forehead with his long sharp canine teeth. He then let go and tried to shove himself onto the attacking wolf, shoving him off Silver. Puzzles tried everything get the wolf to understand. "Listen !" he roared like almighty thunder itself, wondering if he will finally understand that this was all a mix up. 'If that retarded poop doesent listen I'll rip his throat to shreds' he thought. the sun and the science - SilverWintercoat - Feb 08, 2012 Silver saw Puzzles charge the large he-wolf and attack. She watched the small wolf attack with ferocity and was amazed about his loyalty to save others. Silver tried to dodge his new attack, but fumbled backwards. Shaking herself as she got up she attacked again, but with a bite that should puncher skin, fat, and any other material that stood in her way. "I'm sick of wolves! I would rather go back and live with foxes," she thought. Then she thought of some thing. She leaped trying to us both weight and force to at least get him off balance. If this didn't work then she would bite him even harder than before hopping to draw at least a satisfactory amount of blood. Growling again she sang loudly,"Savage, savage, savage beast. Go away!" Silver kept repeating the words as loud as she could. "Try attacking with my horrible annoying singing," she thought insanely. the sun and the science - Raigo - Feb 09, 2012 @Puzzles & Silver: This is a warning that you need to avoid powerplay when writing your posts. <!--QuoteBegin-->
That's a pretty clear case where you did not give Kiche the chance to say what happened to his character. The proper way to write that would have been to say that Puzzles tried to grab Kiche's forehead and tried to bounce on him. Kiche is doing a fair job of not avoiding every attack, likewise you should do the same. Also, please keep in mind that Kiche is a larger male, and therefor will be stronger than either Silver or Puzzles, though he will be slower. Also, the post requirement for RoW is 2-3 paragraphs per post, so please begin to lengthen your posts. I think you will find that doing so will make the fight much less confusing to follow and to have an idea of who is attacking what and where they're hitting. Thank you. |