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.... ooc name: van
.... current characters: Nori, Riven, Rosemary, Isidore, Lillia, Felyx
.... how you found us: zeta tube
.... your character's initial fight stats: Sharpshooter
....a role play sample (200+ words):

There were many other pups in the Backwater that Rosemary had yet to be brave enough to approach. The pack had grown a lot bigger since she'd joined up with her sad little rabbit offering several weeks ago, and Rose had been avoidant at best, too overwhelmed by the idea of meeting multiple wolves at once to really talk much to anyone. For the most part, she'd been polite in passing, but had mainly kept to herself.

It wasn't that she thought they'd be mean, exactly, but for a kid who had been raised mostly alone for the first several, formative months of her life, approaching strangers was frightening to say the least.

But the cowardice ended today, she decided! Atlas had sisters, and she knew they were bound to the territory right now, and probably very bored, and maybe she could help with that. Atlas had been nice, after all, so why should the other two be any different?

It was that thought that gave her the confidence necessary to approach Hera that day, still a little cautious, but body language undeniably friendly as she came up to the other girl. Her tail wagged hesitantly at her haunches, and she stopped a few feet away. She had a treat, after all, and Rose didn't want to seem like she was trying to take it away.

"Hi," she said simply, and her voice only wobbled a tiny bit. And, since it was polite to introduce yourself, she added, "I'm Rosemary - what's your name?"

and finally a bit about your character.... Disobeying his mom for the first time in his life.
Hi Van!

Everything looks good, except it appears your describe Amadeau as the eldest daughter of Xulia (it might just be a phrase of speech but it comes across a little confusing), while all the other sections of the profile (sex, gender, etc) say Male. Once that is sorted we can get the acceptance up :)
It's just kind of a phrase rather than an actual assigned gender! I went ahead and changed it but it's like a phrase used for eldest kids who have had to take on more responsibility.