It looks fine! I'm tagging a closing post on for Iopah, which gives us the 3 final posts we need to make this thread eligible for LP. I will wait till 4/21 to archive, so everyone has until then to add one last post! PM if you need longer than that.
She watched the action as if it were in slow motion. The bull fell in a slow billow of dust. Iopah stepped around the fallen prey animal, moving slowly through a swirl of animal hair and fine particles of cedar-wood. Her golden eyes were tight on the fallen moose and a coral-pink wet the edges of her lips anxiously. Here it was, this was the opportunity they needed and had been waiting for. She danced closer yet, her insignificant 95 pounds so very tempted to lunge despite itself.
A whine started to lengthen into an impatient growl as a lupine body burst from the foliage. Iopah flashed forward as Eirian made his move. With no though to the others action she worried over the moose's hooves, hoping to keep it's attention and ready to snap should they move towards her packmate.
Pale ears flicked forward to catch those last strangled breaths and her flared nostrils were overwhelmed with the scent of fresh blood. She pushed forward as the large male stepped back. Passing by Eirian, she offered a brief to his chest as thanks and to clear some of the gore. With a crooning bark for the others to join her, Iopah began the feast, sure that @Koda was only moments behind her.