I would quite like to continue it! I like long threads, but if you're more comfortable ending it here, let me know and I'll tag something on at the end. And yes, we must do this again, it has been awesome :3 I'm tempted to have Marsh join MP, so might see you there? (...could do with some more testosterone >>)
Assuming her compliance in several bits at the end - if Murder would not act as thus, it is easy to change. It just sounds better to assume than go 'and if blah, he would blah' for more than a few sentences.
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She followed.
That was enough for Marsh; rumbling contentedly, he couldn't resist showing his excitement in his tail, but conserved most of the energy for the journey - and the hunt, which would probably be quite tiring with just two of them.
He was sure they were capable. His confidence in her wouldn't be for nothing, would it?
Again Marsh resented the wind, which was not working in their favour at all. No wonder the girl had attacked from the other direction; it had covered her presence completely. Shame she hadn't been able to pull it off alone. The deer would be on the alert, though probably not expecting a second danger so soon, so that would be in their favour. They would still have to be careful about that wind. Marsh debated scenarios and tactics as they loped steadily back down the steep incline, winding their way through the plants and rocky terrain which served well to hide their bodies from view. He strained to scent the herd, but it was no use, it was no use; they'd have to drastically relocate, or just rely on eyes and ears. Marsh wasn't comfortable enough in the latter. It would seriously impair their chances, he believed.
They soon hit flat ground, but Marsh didn't stop. Being hungry but <i>patient</i>, he led them both on a roundabout trail, using his detailed knowledge of the immediate area to his significant advantage. He knew how far the trees and bushes extended, and he knew where the grass-grazers liked to roam, and he knew how far they were comfortable walking. He knew the best hidden routes. There certainly were benefits to staying in one place for extended periods of time! Eventually, when Marsh inhaled, the hint of deer filled his nostrils, and he knew that they had turned the tables. Huffing, pleased with himself, he glanced once at the girl, and then darted off again.
Now they needed a good stretch of land, suitable for the chase, using terrain to help direct the herd since they were so lacking in other wolves. Fortunately, he had a good idea - the river. Well, one of them. It was not so deep that the deer would not consider leaping into it to escape death, but not all of them would be so keen, and it wouldn't be hard to encourage them to run forwards rather than sideways... hopefully. He still couldn't see or hear them, but having the wind advantage put Marsh to great ease. They came to a shadowed spot, under the canopy of trees, and Marsh finally stopped. He could hear the water to their right, and, if his judgements were correct...
Yes. It would work. But with only two bodies, they had to be assigned their duties carefully. Marsh had beaten the bitch, but she was not weak. If it had been more vicious, he was sure she would have shown a lot more of her capabilities. The only thing he did not know was if she was fast - very fast - and he regretted not testing that. Marsh was not fast, but he knew he had stamina, and that was an adequate replacement given the circumstances. He did know, however, that she was brave.
That was enough to decide. Lifting his nose to the air, he made some last-minute judgements before deeming it acceptable. He then turned on the girl, lowering his head, growling at her, demanding her to stay. If she did not understand quickly, he would nip at her hindlegs and rump until she sat or laid down. They had mutually comprehended each other well enough so far, though, so why not now?
Upon her compliance, Marsh nudged her cheek gently with his nose, giving thanks and good luck and all at once. This would not work without her.
Without a single word of explanation, he turned tail and quickly disappeared.
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