However, all heroes hid deep within a number of flaws, and Mace had many, none of them ones he admitted readily to. Some of them were unintentional, many of them going unnoticed by the boy, but some of them were grating even to him.
This was one such flaw.
Damnit! his mind screamed as his paws skidded to a stop on the leaf-litter of the forest, and he watched with heavy, flaring breath and heated eyes as his prey — a hare that should have been fat and slow enough even for him — disappeared into the thick underbrush. His chest heaved in fury, anguish, and exhaustion as he turned from his failed hunt (another one, as he hadn't succeeded in one yet) with an angry scruff of his paw against the ground. His tail lashed in agitation behind him, and Mace, being yet young and brash and full of passions, found that he could not control his temper.
Quil and Rowan had both caught things, and Cinder, he hadn't seen… But he was certain she had caught something as well. That left only him, the biggest, the strongest, the elder son… But also the slowest and most bullish of his siblings, and sadly, cut from the cloth of warriors and guardians, and not at all from that of hunters. He was too slow, too loud, and too large to do so effectively. He hadn't given up on it, had continued practicing and trying, but to no avail, and finally, the result of so many failures, when he had put in so much effort, overwhelmed him and struck a fire in his belly.
Woe upon the creature that the fierce young Attaya came upon next.
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